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Don't Try to fight the current.by =xXMoonblossomRCXx

Digital Art / Drawings / Animals

Comments will be more appreciated the favorites, ppl D:
So, Ya. Took me longer then I expected it to, LOL.
Hope you guys like it! ^^

~
RiverClan is like the current,
Throw the wrong thing in our path,
We'll sweep it away.
We're calm and gentle,
With our Clan,
If you mess it up,
You'll regret it.
~

Critique by *Mistystarx Jan 15, 2013, 5:11:32 AM

This is awesome, I must say, Moon! xD
There's only just a few mistakes I wanted to point out.
I love the expressions, But the structure of the face is just a circle. Try curving the face in with the snout a little, To fix it.
The anatomy is better then I could do at your stage of digital drawing, but there it one thing I've got to point out. The stomach is the same level as the chest. Try curving the stomach in or out, so it almost meets the bottom line of the tail. Not do it just ends at her hinds.
Other then that, I think this is great! keep up the good work!

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~Terra-Kat Feb 2, 2013

Ahhh, I love thisssssss
And the way you drew her muzzle to her mouth, it looks 3D, which is awesome C:
I also really like her tail!
Did you make up the literature for RiverClan?

=xXMoonblossomRCXx Feb 3, 2013

Thanks alot! ^^
And yes.

*Mistystarx Jan 15, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Whoooa xD
I made a lot of spelling errors in my critique
Oopsy xD

=xXMoonblossomRCXx Jan 15, 2013

LOOOOL.

=Embermaskxoxo Jan 15, 2013 Hobbyist Traditional Artist

_{Wow, awesome!~ Great job! You're definitely improving.}

=xXMoonblossomRCXx Jan 15, 2013

Thanks Ember :3

~IndigofurOfTT Jan 15, 2013

sweet

*Mistystarx Jan 15, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Psssshhh Improvement.
Oh Mai that expression I love it.
Keep up the good work xD

=xXMoonblossomRCXx Jan 15, 2013

Thanks Misty XD

~Sorrow881 Jan 15, 2013

Nice!

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